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“Waking Up and Taking Charge” by Anya Kamenetz. This article talks about college students and how we can take control of our lives/money back. It is very much involved around money and how college students come out of school with so much debt. The author gives helpful suggestions about how we can take the controlContinue reading “rough draft 1”

CLAIM: You should join a student run PAC for political change against college debt QUALIFIER: ‘Should’, The claim isn’t a definite thing, joining a PAC isn’t a thing that will work all of the time and she shows that using a counterargument EXCEPTIONS: The exception to this is that if the PAC is backed byContinue reading “CL 2-13”

I believe that college debt is a real thing and there are many ways to handle it. Kamenetz makes good points and offers good solutions to what you can do to save money and pay off your debt. Kamenetz talks about using PAC and AARP and these are good viable solutions to debt issues andContinue reading “HW 2/11”

8. Characters because of they way she states her values (if you’re impatient, like me) & reason that builds case that supports PAC organizing (which is her claim) 9. The aim of argument in this essay is persuasion because she is trying to get more readers to join her side and take action with her.Continue reading “CL 2/11”

1. reason: almost everyone who goes to college comes out with college debt character: “when I attended Tulane University back in the 70’s the tuition was 2,500 now its over 60,000.” emotion: refer to paragraph 4 on page 403 of The Aims of Argument. Style: paragraph 6 on page 403 of The Aims of ArgumentContinue reading “CL 2/6”

1. The value of a degree has gone down because you could get the same education at any college. But you are taken more seriously if you go to a big name collage that is more expensive. 2. reason: almost everyone who goes to college comes out with college debt character: “when I attended TulaneContinue reading “CL 2/4”

Claim: respect from the government and politics Reason: “rolled over by greedy middle-aged and older people who have been expropriationg our earnings for generations.” Evidence: “The federial government gives out most student financial aid.” 1. it is very controversial. 2. The college students and parents or guardians would agree with her because they are theContinue reading “HW 1/30”

1. Her proposal is very controversial. The people who would agree with her would be the people playing college sports. The people who wouldn’t agree with her would be the Drama people. The people who play sports would agree because it would benefit them in more ways. The people in Drama would disagree because theyContinue reading “CL 1/30”

Claim: the cost of college and student loans reason: as time goes on costs go up and it goes up the better the school is, and if you go to that better school you get a better education and therefore you get a better job etc… Evidence: In The Aims the author provides the tuitionContinue reading “HW 1/28”

1. I believe they should have been persuading us. They should have wanted us to be on their side of the argument. 2. They weren’t really persuading the audience they were using dialogue to talk back and forth to one another. They were talking amongst themselves how to “kill” this old man. 3. Well-informed ;Continue reading “CL 1/28”